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This updates documentation pages that used filler-heavy lead-ins and weak transitions, replacing them with direct wording that is faster to scan and easier for non-native English speakers to follow. The content stays the same; only the phrasing is tightened.

Cut phrases that announce a point instead of making it. Direct statements read better and are easier for non-native English speakers.

  • What changed

    • Removed low-value lead-ins such as Note that, Please note that, It should be noted that, and Of course.
    • Rewrote indirect constructions such as In order to... to shorter forms like To....
    • Simplified a few sentences that used softeners such as simply or actually where they did not add meaning.
  • Scope

    • Updated wording in docs across:
      • Basics
      • Advanced
      • Features
      • Interfaces
    • Kept navigation, structure, and technical guidance unchanged.
  • Example rewrite

    - Note that if a `ledmap.json` file exists, the `2d-gaps.json` file will be ignored.
    + If a `ledmap.json` file exists, the `2d-gaps.json` file will be ignored.
  • Result

    • Documentation reads more directly without removing useful emphasis or encouraging language.

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Documentation

  • Clarified setup and safety guidance for WiFi, GPIO numbering, LED strips, MOSFETs, WS2814, and compatible hardware.
  • Updated networking, HTTPS, Pixelforge downloads, compiler installation, serial configuration, and infrared troubleshooting instructions.
  • Documented mapping behavior, relay and MQTT motion controls, Home Assistant integration, JSON API details, and web-control limitations.
  • Improved DMX, UDP, controller, and effects documentation, including newly listed v16.0 effects.
  • Corrected grammar, spelling, punctuation, and examples throughout the documentation.

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The pull request revises wording, spelling, links, examples, and formatting across WLED documentation. It clarifies setup, hardware, feature, API, and interface guidance without changing product behavior.

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Advanced documentation guidance
docs/advanced/*
Clarifies HTTPS, OTA security, mapping precedence, compilation, hardware examples, and setup wording.
Basic setup and hardware guidance
docs/basics/*
Refines safety, controller, hardware, WiFi, GPIO, FAQ, installation, and LED guidance.
Feature documentation guidance
docs/features/*
Updates effect entries and clarifies PixelForge, relay, MQTT, CCT, Ethernet, macro, multi-strip, and settings documentation.
Interface documentation guidance
docs/interfaces/*
Rephrases DMX, HTTP API, infrared, JSON API, serial, and UDP realtime guidance.
Contributor and terminology corrections
docs/about/contributors.md
Corrects a contributor description typo.

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This documentation-only PR removes filler wording and corrects phrasing across 31 pages without changing product behavior. Several edits still leave ambiguous or grammatically incorrect technical guidance, including API wording that may imply the wrong number of color slots, so the PR is mergeable with explicit owner follow-up on these documentation issues.

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In `@docs/advanced/custom-features.md`:
- Line 285: Update the documentation sentence to replace “Web UI interface” with
“Web UI,” preserving the rest of the wording and technical meaning.

In `@docs/basics/getting-started.md`:
- Line 80: Update the GPIO example in the getting-started documentation to use
the grammatically correct “e.g., D4” punctuation, preserving the surrounding
pinout guidance.

In `@docs/features/relay-control.md`:
- Line 27: Revise the relay-control sentence for clear grammar by adding the
missing articles and changing “Multi relay usermod” to the canonical “Multi
Relay usermod” capitalization, while preserving the existing meaning and
guidance.
- Line 27: Update the PIR sensor MQTT documentation in the paragraph containing
“/motion” to state that the published topic is the configured MQTT device topic
followed by “/motion,” and include the existing example format such as
“wled/deviceMAC/motion” rather than describing it as a standalone topic.

In `@docs/interfaces/json-api.md`:
- Line 381: Rewrite the CCT/RGB sentence in the documentation to clarify that
RGB color and the white channel are controlled through three shared color slots
per segment, not six independent slots; preserve the per-segment CCT behavior.

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- Line 115: Update the sentence in the Web control documentation to replace the
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Replace "Web UI interface" with "Web UI".

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![Controlling analog LED strips](../assets/images/content/pic44.jpg)

Note that there is no GND connection between the controller and the amplifier. And this despite the fact that with all other WLED circuits it is always said that all GNDs must be connected to each other. This special feature is due to the fact that the inputs of the amplifier are galvanically decoupled from the outputs by optocouplers and the amplifier in this circuit is used slightly differently than its usual application.
There is no GND connection between the controller and the amplifier. Unlike most other WLED circuits, the grounds stay separate here because the inputs of the amplifier are galvanically decoupled from the outputs by optocouplers, and the amplifier in this circuit is used slightly differently than in its usual application.

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@DedeHai please check if the info is technically correct.

@softhack007 softhack007 changed the title Tighten doc wording by removing low-value filler phrases, coreect some spelling errors Tighten doc wording by removing low-value filler phrases, coreect some speling errors Aug 16, 2026

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Went through every hunk. The rewrites read faithful to the original meaning, including the MOSFET and amplifier-GND paragraphs, and the typo fixes all check out (no leftover "Sensivity"/"Persistant" variants in effects.md).

Two coordination notes:

  • This PR overlaps #364 in several of the same regions: the &NF= row sits in a table #364 reformats, #364 deletes the pss row whose typo is fixed here, and the ARLS section in udp-realtime.md is being discussed for relocation over there. Whichever PR merges second will need a manual pass, and a couple of these hunks become moot if #364 lands first.
  • The PR title itself has "coreect some speling errors" in it. Worth fixing before merge since it becomes the commit message.

Three small inline comments, otherwise LGTM.

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@bharvey88 thanks for the cross-reading 🥇

You're right this one overlaps with parts of #364, I'll merge this one first and then try to patch up #364.

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Oops, close by accident.

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an -> and

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The original "actually indicating signal transmission" was the warning: the LED claims a signal went out even though the correct signal was not sent. Without "actually" the sentence now contradicts itself.

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add colon before the list

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In `@docs/about/contributors.md`:
- Line 31: Update the contributor description near the netmindz entry to
hyphenate “Frequency based” as “Frequency-based,” leaving the rest of the
description unchanged.

In `@docs/advanced/audio-reactive.md`:
- Line 89: Update the audio-reactive documentation sentence beginning “In a
pinch” to use direct wording such as “As a temporary option,” while preserving
the existing technical guidance and warning.

In `@docs/advanced/ddp.md`:
- Line 18: Update the DDP documentation note to replace “a small number of LEDs
(&lt;300)” with “fewer than 300 LEDs,” while preserving the surrounding ESP8266
performance guidance.

In `@docs/advanced/mapping.md`:
- Line 18: Update the ledmap.json description to add the missing article before
“JSON” and hyphenate “JSON-formatted,” while preserving the existing explanation
of the map key and pixel-order array.

In `@docs/basics/compatible-software.md`:
- Around line 27-29: Update the three changed rows in the compatible software
table to include both leading and trailing pipes, matching the existing rows and
standard GFM table formatting.

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- Around line 280-281: Update the image previews in the PS Dancing Shadows and
PS Fireworks 1D rows, along with the additional affected preview rows, to
include concise descriptive alt text instead of empty alt attributes; identify
each preview by its corresponding effect name while preserving the existing
image paths and sizing.

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- Line 46: Update the documentation sentence around “LED outputs” to remove the
colon after the quoted phrase, so it reads “LED outputs” section while
preserving the rest of the text.
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Frequency based -> Frequency-based

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small readability improvement
Replace the idiom “In a pinch.”
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